Monday, March 21, 2011

sun salutation 2

After some feedback from class, I did some revisions. Which one do you like better???

11 comments:

Di said...

Shoot Bethany - I like them both! They're great!!

Willow said...

My orderly little soul likes the one on the left because it's more symetrical. But that's just me :)

Bethany Hissong said...

Linda, I am feeling the same way you are because the main point is to be able to easily follow it. Now someone suggested I actually increase the size of the circles on the right and have them start to come off the page-- it would make it more visually interesting but at some point, I will totally lose the whole order of the sequence!
Thanks for both of your comments! :)

Becky said...

I like the one on the left too. I haven't done much yoga, but from pilates breathing it so important. The left conveys the long deep even breathes to me. It also portrays each step being equally important not swaying like the one on the right. I am not sure I'm making any sense. It might be a result of having cheerios for dinner:) I haven't done that in a long time. Boy! Cereal is an easy dinner!!

Jojo Caramel said...

Ma ma ma! You are so talented! It's beautiful! The first one is certainly easier to read (follow) but i like the second one, on the right, je lui trouve plus de relief (very graphic)! I love your work!

Terri Fisher said...

I, too, like the first one. It's easier to follow and just has a clean look that really draws the eye to it. Very nice!

~3iNnA~ said...

I like the one on the left. Easier to follow if one do not know the steps.

Barbara Brown said...

I like the one on the left better, it is easier to follow and more orderly. The colors are so pretty. Great job.

Jean-François said...

Je préfère le chemin visuel et la déconstruction de la seconde (on the right).

Bethany Hissong said...

I love getting all this feedback! Thank you all so much!

Gotta Knit! said...

It might be to late and I do not know Yoga. The right one visually speaks to me. It flows better to my eyes. My eyes feel more comfortable looking at it.

That and a glass of wine will get you a glass of wine!